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Nudist Velociraptor lineart by Tomozaurus Nudist Velociraptor lineart by Tomozaurus
Yes, it is that time again. "Common Errors for Velociraptor" is finally getting a re-vamp.

This is just the template Velociraptor anatomy study that I will be using to create the other images for the finished work.

Critiques (anatomical/paleontological I mean) encouraged.
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WDGHK Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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ScottHartman Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
It looks really cold! Ferahgo's comments are all spot on. I'd also note that the base of the tail should be a bit heavier; there shouldn't be a bottom line to the caudofemoralis visible, as it actually goes all the way to the bottom margin of the tail.
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Tomozaurus Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Student General Artist
Alright, thanks. I'll thicken out the caudofemoralis even more.
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gorgoraptor Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011
Man, featherless Velociraptors look so weird now.
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EWilloughby Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Professional General Artist
Looks great. I like how you've given it a small patagium and skin attaching the thigh to the body, as in birds. One minor critique I have is that the flexor tubercle of the retracted toe should probably be larger (maybe on the fingers, too). I'm also not too sure about whether the teeth would be realistically that visible outside of the mouth. There was a fairly recent study indicating that theropods might have had more "lip" than previously thought. I still tend to draw dromaeosaurs with a little bit of visible tooth protrusion, but considerably less than you're showing here.
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Tomozaurus Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you for the critique. I'll add a bit more lip to it and beef up the flexor, I;m actually going to beef up the whole foot, I think. It doesn't look quite proportionate at the moment.
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DeinonychusEmpire Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Eww, put some feathers on!! =P
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